Educational Research Analysts
November 2006 Newsletter  
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 excerpts from our review of 
A History of US
Oxford, ©2005
Third Edition, Revised — California Edition
vols. 3-8
Submitted in California as a 8th grade U.S. History text  •  Request our review for full documentation and more.
Political correctness trumps constitutional issues.
Almost nothing on violations of Americans' rights as Englishmen under the British constitution by acts of Parliament, 1763-75 62 lines on gender inequality in fami­lies and politics during the Revolu­tion­ary era
Nothing on Constitutional Convention conflicts over choosing the president (Electoral College), tariffs (no export tariffs), or the 2/3s Senate majority to ratify treaties 128 student text line ecological travel­ogue through Florida Everglades in 1899
Text narrative is silent on strict vs. loose construction. Sourcebook wrongly implies that only loose constructionists believe in implied powers. In fact, both strict and loose constructionists accept implied powers, but to the former the elastic clause means absolutely necessary, while the latter read "necessary and proper" as convenient, and nowhere expressly prohibited. 250 student text lines deplore male sexism in antebellum U.S. and/or devalue traditional sex roles in marriage and family and/or demean women who upheld them.
Nothing on constitutional problems of Radical Reconstruction 10 student text lines on marital strife between John Quincy Adams and his wife ("hanging and marriage were strongly assimilated")
Biographical approach fails as a survey.
Student text ignores Washington's Neutrality Proclamation, Jay's Treaty, and 1807 Embargo Act. Teaching Guide covers all 3 in 4+ lines. 41 student text lines on a 1600 lb. cheese given by Massa­chu­setts citizens to Thomas Jeffer­son
Nothing on Pinckney's Treaty, Rush-Bagot Treaty, Hartford Convention, Panic of 1819, or Webster-Ashburton Treaty 127 student text lines on L. Frank Baum, creator of Wizard of Oz
Student text omits XYZ Affair (tells students to look it up in an encyclopedia). 33 student text lines on daily life of King Charles VI of Spain
7 student text lines on Nullification Crisis 104 student text lines on a woman climbing Pike's Peak in bloomers
Nothing on Democratic party breakup and 4-man presidential race in 1860 200 student text lines on Harriet Tubman
Nothing on 1903 Hay-Bunau-Varilla Treaty, which gained the U.S. the Panama Canal route 105 student text lines on Susan B. Anthony's voting in 1872, her arrest and trial
Anti-white animus taints narrative.
Nothing on Indian massacres of British frontier garrisons during Pontiac's Rebellion, or on Indians' habit of sadistically torturing captives, sometimes eating slain foes, or drinking their blood (see Francis Parkman, Conspiracy of Pontiac, vol. 1 [Boston: Little, Brown, and Company, 1895], pp. 269, 298, 343) Reference to British practice of executing captured Indians (pro­bably during Pontiac's Rebel­lion)
Nothing on American heroism in Mexican War, such as:
  • A U.S. dragoon charge up the center against Mexican artillery helped break the line and win the Battle of Resaca de la Palma.
  • The accuracy and almost superhuman rapidity of American artillery fire at the climax of the Battle of Buena Vista overcame the greatest odds the U.S. Army had ever faced.
15 student text lines on battles in the Mexican War, 11 of which refer to Mexican heroism (los ninos at Chapultepec)
Pejoratively quotes U.S. general W.T. Sherman's use of Nazi-like term "final solution" for killing Indians Non-judgmentally quotes Indian chief Tecumseh's racist state­ment, "Let the white race perish."
Double standard slaps at Christians.
Carelessly offends Christians by multiple instances of swearing Carefully avoids offending non-Christians by using "B.C.E." and "C.E." instead of "B.C." and "A.D."
Almost nothing on the first Great Awakening, one of the most signi­ficant events between colonization and the American Revolution: student text very briefly mentions the first Great Awakening but omits its relation to the Revolution; Teaching Guide once vaguely refers to the first Great Awaken­ing's weakening "traditional authority and loyalties"; no explanation that it was anti-elitist (stressed faith over reason), emphasized democratic opportunity (all could be saved), reaffirmed Protestant individualism (priesthood of all believers), united colonists in a common experience, expanded most those denominations (Baptists, Methodists) seeking disestablishment, and (unlike the Enlightenment) voiced a pessimistic view of human nature (sinful man needing a divine Savior) requiring checks and balances in government Presents negative attitudes toward Christian­ity.
  • 48 student text line quote of speech by Iroquois chief Red Jacket disdaining white settlement and Christianity in preference to Indian control of the land and Indian religion
  • Disapproval of Christian missionaries "threatening" and disrespecting Indian beliefs and culture



first-time-evers in this
California project

   
MULTIPLIED TRACTION
IN TWO BIGGEST STATES
Our working in both California and Texas
nationalizes demand for textbook reform
in markets where publishers listen best.
To reform textbooks you must first
open up the state approval process,
which in California limits citizen input.
TARGETED CHANGE
IN CALIFORNIA'S RULES
FACED LESS DEMOCRATIC
CIRCUMSTANCES
That California's State Board of
Education is unelected boded
ill for hopes of redress …
… but a judge unexpectedly
ordered California to revamp
its textbook approval procedure.
RECEIVED MOMENTUM
FROM A COURT RULING
BREACHED BARRIERS
TO PARTICIPATION
Most would deem exhaustive
our efforts to gain real access
to submitted textbook samples.
We worked below publishers' and
California's radar lest they change their
behavior and spoil the experiment.
CONCEALED ENGAGEMENT
DURING OUR STUDY
REVIEWED 8TH GRADE
U.S. HISTORY TEXTBOOKS
Those books got the same scrutiny
on key issues that we usually give
to high school U.S. History texts.
Our reviews exposed teachers
to concepts and info that their
training may have skipped.
PACKED OUR RATING SHEET
WITH NEW PERSPECTIVES
CITED "CORRECTED"
TEXTBOOK EDITIONS
Editors and California undeniably
missed the 427 factual errors we found
in the "final" versions sent statewide.
We timed our release just right
to improve future adoptions, if
a little late to affect these sales.
PRIORITIZED LONG
RUN OVER SHORT TERM
EXPANDED COVERAGE
OF PUBLIC SCHOOLS
Our faxed textbook rating sheet went
to individual campuses, not to school
district offices, reaching more teachers.
Many California Christian schools
use the same books, so we sent
them our rating sheet as well.
INCLUDED COVERAGE
OF CHRISTIAN SCHOOLS